Editor's report
I’ve spent the last week or so reading the report I received back from the editor. I’ve also changed the story based on her feedback.
I’ve dropped one character, and their story. While I liked the character, and I thought it was an interesting plot, if I was honest with myself, it never really involved itself in the overall theme of the story. I might use it some other way in the future.
For the other characters, I just needed to move some events around so that they felt more realistic. Change how one character looked at the events that were happening. Nothing major.
I am shocked.